Themes Of Collaboration: Presentation Review

Presentation 2: Communication

The group presentation on the topic about ‘Communication’ was by the group ‘Shades of Black’ and was overall quite a good presentation. It was clear that each individual had thouragly researched their sub topic of the presentation and presented a good amount of useful information.

The layout of the slides was also done well, as there was a good balance of text and pictures which accompanied what the speaker was saying. While it is easy for presentations to be made where the text on screen is essentially what is being said by the speaker, this group ensured that the text on screen was accompanying what the speaker said, rather than repeating it.

While there was a good balance of pictures, not all of them were relevant to the topic, making it seem as if the picture was included just for the sake of having a picture included.

The video at the end of the presentation was also a nice touch and something a little different.  Even though the content in the video was quite similar to what had already been said, I found that it was a more engaging medium which would have allowed people who had possibly ‘tuned out’ earlier in the presentation, to catch up on the information they missed.

Overall I thought ‘Shade of Black’ produced an informative presentation that was well spoken and engaging to the peers.

Presentation 3a: Intellectual Property

The group ‘Interactive Architecture’ presented a clear and well thought out presentation on Intellectual Property. As a group it was clear that the topic had been well researched although it did appear as if some speakers knew the information they were presenting more than others which made parts of the presentation more informative than others.

I thought the overall presentation was good although some members of the group read a little too much from the screen, or palm cards, which should serve as cue points to stimulate thoughts rather than a different medium to read full paragraphs from.

The layout of the slides were good, however the group needs to take into consideration the sizing of images when presenting to a group. When working on a computer screen images appear much easier to read than to an audience sitting at a distance from a screen.

One of the groups’ strongest presentation points was their use of examples, which not only demonstrated their understanding of the content, but helped the audience understand the points they were trying to make. These examples often were accompanied by useful images which made this the most engaging part of their presentation.

It would, however, have been nice to hear a few more examples of how their knowledge of Intellectual Property was related to their own project .

Overall I thought this presentation covered the topic well. Through the use of examples I felt that it brought the quality of the presentation up.

Presentation 3b: Intellectual Property

The second group to present the topic ‘Intellectual Property’ was the group ‘Geriambience’. As there were two groups presenting the same topic, it was interesting to see how two different groups would go about the same topic, and as a result produce two differing presentations.

My first observation for this presentation was how thorough it was as it was obvious that there had been a lot of research and planning put into the presentation. In terms of content, the information that was presented was fairly similar to the first group.

The slides were also quite good in terms of content, however the colour scheme of it didn’t do them any favours. While it was good that the text on screen was quite simplified, at time I found it a little too simplified to the point that if I missed what the speaker was saying I had no idea what was being discussed.

The slides could have also used a few more images to help explain their points stronger.

Overall I thought Geriambiance presented a clear and concise report about Intellectual Property that could have been further enhanced with a little more attention to the aesthetics of the presentation.

Presentation 4a: Conflict

The group ‘DCLD’ presentation on the topic of ‘Conflict.’ Overall I thought this presentation was researched well, but was displayed in an okay manner.

The presentation slides were set out nicely, although I felt some slides contained too much text which resulted in the speaker just reading from the slides. It was unfortunate that this happened as it had been quite extensively addressed by the tutors to previous groups, which made it seem as if it was a last minute presentation.

The use of images however, I thought was quite good as they used images both unrelated, but also related to their project, which showed how their research related to their own project. I also found their examples to their own group project quite interesting, and was possibly the best part of their presentation, as it showed how as a group they handled conflict.

I felt that by presenting from behind a computer screen it made them seem disconnected from the audience. It came across as they were just speaking, and we were listening, as opposed they were speaking directly to us as a target audience. Apart from this however, I felt that everyone spoke clear enough so that the audience could understand everything that was being said, although some people sitting further away may have struggled to hear as some members spoke a little too quietly.

Overall I thought that DCLD had researched the topic of conflict quite well and covered the different aspects off it.

Presentation 4b: Conflict

The second group to present their research on conflict, was the group ‘Kinecting the Boxes.’ This presentation started off very well, but as it progressed I felt it started to lack a little engagement.

I thought that the topic was well researched, however some members seemed to be a little unprepared to present their research as their presentation of their sub topics felt a little disjointed. Unfortunately, as with other groups, I found that there was a little too much text on screen which resulted in them reading straight from the screen.

Their use of images was quite good as most were quite relatable to the topics being discussed which helped with the engagement of the audience.  They also made good use of examples from both inside the group and outside the group which not only further explained their own points, but proved they had an understanding of the topics they were discussing.

Overall I felt that the content and research of this presentation was good, but just needed to have a little more time spent on the organising and planning of the presentation itself.